英语写作指导
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英语写作指导1
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英语写作指导2
记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写"，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的'来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It's you." I said, quite released.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H "，但动笔之前，围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang e back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it. She served them with tea but they left.
修改后：
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.
"Don't worry, we'll send you home."
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
When the worried mother saw her son e back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
英语写作指导3
句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的`表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。
英语基本句型及造句:
1.主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从句)
The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west.
We get up early every morning.
The meeting lasted 2 hours.
2.主语+不及物动词+副词
This kind of wine drinks well and sells well.
The suit wears well.
Glass breaks easily.
3.主语+谓语+介词+宾语
We all agreed on the terms.
He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters.
All these things are to be answered for.
4.主语+系动词+形容词
Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.
He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.
Your explanation sounds reasonable.
5.主语+谓语+直接宾语
I want your promise.
Have your fixed my watch?
This factory produces 1000 cars a week.
6.主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语
He paid me a visit yesterday.
He owed me 50 yuan.
He wrote his family a letter yesterday.
7.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(to do)
I will get someone to repair the recorder for you.
I didn’t mean to hurt you.
He in vited me to teach at a well-known university.
8.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(do)
I often hear her sing the song.
The boss made workers work 15 hours a day.
Don’t forget to have him come.
10.主语+谓语+现在分词
I heard her singing in the next room.
We could feel our heats beating fast.
Did you observe the birds flying around the trees?
11.主语+谓语+过去分词
I must have my watch repaired.
We must get he task finished on time.
Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.
12.主语+谓语+宾语(动名词)
I suggested putting off the meeting.
They all avoided mentioning the matter.
We can’t help laughing at the news.
13.主语+谓语+宾语(不定式)
I can’t afford to buy such a large house.
Don’t pretend to know what you don’t.
He feared to speak in her presence.
14.主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语
Nothing can prevent us from going forward.
Thank you for your help.
He demanded an answer from me.
练习写好句子的方法
1.合并句子
It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers.
Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.
A girl was crossing a road. Th e girl was pretty. The road was wide.
A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.
2.改写句子
1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介词短语做伴随状语)
1) The book cost me 300 yuan.
Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.
2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用so…that…结构改写句子)
The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it.
3.一句多译
这本书花了我300元。
I spent 300 yuan on the book.
I paid 300 yuan for the book.
The price of the book is 300 yuan.
It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.
我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。
I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, no more doe s Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.
I know no more English than Li Ming does.
I know as little English as Li Ming does.
一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。
On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen.
昨天下午他才来。
He came here yesterday afternoon.
He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.
Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.
It was n ot until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
英语写作指导4
New Insurance Chief at Union Bank
Union Bank of California, N.A. (San Francisco) has named Michael A. Janes as chief executive officer of its insurance subsidiary, UnionBanc Insurance Services Inc., one of the 30 largest insurance agencies in the United States. Janes joins the agency from Hilb, Rogal & Hobbs Co. where he was regional director of its West Coast operations.
UnionBanc Insurance Services Inc. recently announced the consolidation of its insurance operation under the UnionBanc Insurance Services umbrella. The new agency will be co-branded with the three original agencies of Armstong/Robitaille Business and Insurance Services, John Burnham Insurance, and Tanner Insurance Brokers.
The insurance operation currently has nine offices located in San Diego, Irvine, Fullerton, Glendale, Pleasanton, San Rafael, Stockton, Sacramento—all in California——and in Portland, Oregon. Annual revenue exceeds $80 million and the company employs 415 insurance professionals. The agency has focused on selling commercial property and casualty insurance but recently announced that it plans to expand its personal insurance offerings. The bank also intends to begin distributing life insurance in-house soon (rather than through external wholesalers).
Union Bank of California is a subsidiary of UnionBanCal Corporation. UnionBanCal (assets $49.4 billion) was cited as a 'Top 10' institution in the 20xx Edition of Who's Who in Bank Insurance.
英语写作指导5
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
逻辑：这里的'逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么中考英语作文就一定能搞定！
评分标准：
1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给12-15分；
2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给9-11分；
3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给5-8分；
4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-3分。
英语写作指导6
Tom 正和他的一个朋友Jim 谈论他所在的学校。Tom 很不喜欢这所学校，原因是这所学校的.规章制度太多。
要点：(1)保持安静(2)不准吃零食(3)不准乱扔垃圾(4)不准打闹(5)按时上课(6)做好课前准备
【优秀满分范文】
Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim he doesn’t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules for us.
1. Keep quiet in the classroom ,please.
2. Don’t eat snacks in the classroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.
3. Don’t throw around.
4. Don’t fight and chase after each other in the classroom. Of course, you can’t make any noise.
5. Please arrive at the class on time. Don’t be late, or our teachers will be unhappy.
6. Get ready before the class. Don’t look for anything after the class begins.
If we break any one of them, we will be punished.
Unit5 Why do you like pandas?
【写作话题】本单元以动物话题，描述自己喜欢的动物及原因。
【写作题目】根据下面表格的内容，以A Trip to the Zoo写一篇60词左右的短文介绍一下动物园新来的两只动物。
英语写作指导7
在大学英语六级写作过程中，一个好的开头犹如画龙点睛，点亮了整篇文章得到好的印象分。
(1) 主题句法：The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.
The biggest safety threat facing airlines today may not be a terrorist with a gun, but the man with the portable computer in business class.
Believe it or not, optical illusion (错觉) can cut highway crashes.
(2) 问题法：Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes?
Why does cream go bad faster than butter?
(3) 对比法：Some pessimistic experts feel that the automobile is bound to fall into disuse. They see a day in the not-too-distant future when all autos will be abandoned and allowed to rust. Other authorities, however, think the auto is here to stay. They hold that the car will remain a leading means of urban travel in the foreseeable future.
(4) 数据法：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Living off Campus:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，35%的学生不住宿舍，而是在学校外面租房子住。
Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的'课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
The latest statistics show that …
(5) 故事法：Six o'clock yesterday (June 20th, Friday) afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.
(6) 引语法：A proverb says, "You are only young once."（适用于记住的名言）
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（自编名言）
英语写作指导8
一、常规开头句型
1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…
6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.It's likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.It's hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.There's no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的'是…
13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…
二、四级引出开头
1：It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)
2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)
3：Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)
4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)
5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展，越来越多的人认为……)
6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……)
7：A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……)
8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)
三、高考英语引出开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern. 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.
The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为……
Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……
A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……
英语写作指导9
话题体裁：
日常活动描述常用记叙文来记述发生在日常生活中的一些小故事。根据图画内容写日记是最常见的一种形式，有时该类话题的写作也常设计成议论文，讨论某些日常活动的利弊、影响以及对此活动的建议等。
话题内容：
该话题属于就日常行为和活动进行介绍、描述或评论。故事内容常与中学生的日常生活和学习息息相关，主要有：日常活动的准备过程，如上学、运动、作息等；日常生活中的某些活动，如打扫卫生、做饭、洗衣，甚至包括洗刷、洗浴等个人卫生等细节描述；用餐活动，如一日三餐，尤其是早餐、野餐以及零食等的讨论；业余时间活动描述，除家庭作业外，还有一些娱乐活动，如看电视、散步、参观旅游、拜亲访友等活动的描述和讨论。写作过程中除了要记述故事的发生、发展、高潮和结局外，还要有自己的心理活动的描述，表达自己的观点，有时还要求提出一些科学合理的建议。
话题词汇：
1、该话题写作一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述故事，所以有时需要借助一些表示先后
顺序的词语，如：at first（起先），then（接着），later on（以后），afterwards（后来），soon（不久），finally（最后），at last（终于）等。
2、日记写作中常有一些有关天气的英文表达，比较复杂的有fine（晴朗），hot（热），pretty
warm（相当暖和），shower（阵雨），thundering（雷雨），dense fog（浓雾），haily（冰雹），a little rain，later cloudy（小雨转多云）等。
3、文章常用一些总结性的词语，如on the whole总体上看；in a word总而言之等。
话题句型：
1、多用主系表结构的句型，注意系动词的多样性，如：be，feel，grow，turn等。
2、多用There be句型，注意结合分词作定语的结构，如：There is a man standing under thetree。=There stands a man under the tree。
3、多用不定式短语作目的状语（处在句首或句末）、结果状语（处在句尾）等，如：To improvemy spoken English，I decided to attend then English corner to be held on the square every Friday evening。
4、多用分词短语作时间、条件、原因状语等，如：On hearing the cried for help，I run to the river side and found that a boy was struggling in the water。
5、多用熟练的复句结构：because；where；when等引导的原因、时间、地点等状语从句；which（who）引导的'定语从句；so that…，so…that…引导的目的、结果状语从句；以及I’m sure that…，I think that…这类宾语从句等。
6、文章结尾，常用Though we feel a little tired，we feel very happy。等作为简单的总结。
一试身手：
现在几乎家家户户都有电视机，看电视成了人们的业余活动。请根据厦门的提示内容写一篇120词的短文，根据提示发表自己的观点。
1、电视的作用：娱乐消遣、掌握生活常识、了解知识、开阔眼界、活跃思维等
2、电视的坏处：长时间看电视会伤害人的身体，影响青少年的视力，影响人们的正常工作
和学习。
英语写作指导10
第1，审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时，普遍存在这样一个情况：看完作文题，就开始写，想到哪写到哪，只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章，看起来就像在记流水帐，没有任何逻辑，杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想，如果你是试卷的命题人，你出作文题的时候，肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
第2，提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的.结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第3，文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
第4，细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
最后：背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集
写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞跃，要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集，把精彩的段落和句子抄下来并仿写，最后整理出几十个最常用、最精彩的表达法，写作文时有意识地想一想，总能用上几个。
英语写作5大要素
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中
考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第
一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQ is extremely strong、
观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2—3点说为什么他强壮。
1、每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday！详举吃的是什么。
2、每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day！详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is！I hope to be him one day！
英语写作指导11
写作技巧指导
1.发言稿是介绍性说明文，在语言使用一定要准确简洁，通俗易懂，层次清楚，条理分明。介绍说明事物的内容关系要明确，要求逻辑性强。发言稿印版有开头语，正文和结束语三部分组成。开头语一般来说比较简单，目的就是吸引听众或读者的注意力。
发言稿的开头和结尾一般都有固定的的格式，如：
Dear friends,
I’m glad to introduce myself to you
.___________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
如果是熟悉的听众，头尾可以活泼一些，灵活一些，如：
(1)Good morning,/Good afternoon,everyone…
That’s all. Thank you.
( 2 )Good evening!Ladies and gentlemen..
That’s all. Thank you.
2.正文是发言稿的主体，主要是提供论点和相关的论据等，论点要明确，论据要充分有力。发言稿的正文常见形式：
第一部分：开门见山提出本人要谈的问题及对问题的看法;
第二部分：说明理由，常见的关联词有：First of all , Secondly, Finally等;
第三部分：照应开头，总结全文。最后可以做简明扼要的总结，也可以谈自己的希望或看法等。常见的句式有：In short, In a word…等。
3.发言稿的语句表达要直接面对听众，尽量不要用复杂啰嗦的句子，更不要采用深奥难懂的句子。话要说的'准确易懂，最好用大众语言。除了要求以简单句为主的同时，可以适当穿插一些复合句结构。由于文章要求以简单句为主，所以不要把文章写成单句的罗列，适当的使用关联词承前启后，可以使文章前后连贯，浑然一体。
发言稿的时态一般以现在时态为主。
常用句型
1.I’d like to tell you something about our school.
2.Let me give you a brief introduction about our school.
3.Please allow me to introduce the travel arrangements to you.
4.It’s my honor to say a few words to welcome you.
5.I am sure we will benefit a lot from the lecture.
6.Personally, I think it’s a good idea for us to have daily exercise.
7.In my opinion,…
8.Personally,…
9,In a word,…
10,However,…
万能模板
everyone/ladies and gentlemen,…
It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. My name is…The topic of my speech is…
First, many people suggest that…Secondly,…Thirdly,…
What I want to stress is that…For one thing,…For another,…Besides,…In a word,…
Thank you for your listening.
引入写作范例写作指导
假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。
1.过去对成年的向往;
2.现在的感受和认识;
3.将来的目标及措施。
参考词汇：责任responsibility
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)
1.本文要求写一篇成人仪式上的英语发言稿。开头和结尾均已给出;
2，对写作内容也有了明确的要求：过去对成年的向往、现在对已成年的的感受和认识、成年的我将来的目标及措施;
3，注意时态的交替使用
参考范文
Good morning ,everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts becoming a grow-up.’’
As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now I’m a grow-up, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the the goal, I must first try my best to pass the College Entrance Examination and enter a good universityt.
Thank you for listening.
重点短语
1.grow up长大
2.reach the goal实现目标
3.try one’s best尽最大努力
基础训练高考英语微信公众号Englishtec.
在和谐社会里，在人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的组成部分。下周英国联谊学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful’’为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是王志，准备参加本次演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点：
1.帮助同学----友谊;2.帮助老人----幸福;3.帮助病人----快乐;
4.帮助别人会......
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.文章开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;
Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful
Hello, everyone. I’m Wang Zhi. It’s nice to speak about help here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening.
练习
1.在我们一生中，我们常常帮助别人并且也从别人那里获得帮助。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
2.当我们帮助同学学习和帮助他们做其他事情的时候，我们不仅产生友谊(develop our friendship)而且还建立(build up)了一个和谐校园
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
3.如果我们帮助老人和病人，我们就能理解快乐的意义。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
4.我想当我们帮助我们周围的人我们也得到了许多。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
5.就像那句谚语说的：“给予比得到快乐。”
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范例：假设你是李华。近日，你的英语笔友Jack听说你们学校正在开展“建设节约型社会(Construction of an energysaving society)”主题活动，发来邮件请你介绍一下你对活动的看法和建议。请你结合以下要点，用英语给Jack回复邮件。高考英语微信公众号Englishtec.
1.不浪费粮食和纸张;2.尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋;
3.毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用;4.其他建议
[满分范文]
Dear Jack，
①Glad to receive your email.
②As you know, there has been an activity of “Construction of an energysaving society” in our school recently. ③I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy. ④Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity.
⑤In my opinion, there’re many things we can do. ⑥In our daily life, we shouldn’t waste any food or paper. ⑦It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. ⑧Besides, I think the government should make it a rule that used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school, because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled.
⑨Actually, there are quite a lot that we can easily do, for example, try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. ⑩Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energysaving society.
Yours，
Li Hua
英语写作指导12
报盘
Dear Sir，
We were very pleased to receive your letter of 5th April answering our advertisement for typewriters and, as requested, enclose a copy of our latest illustrated catalogue and current price list.
We think the Portable 95 is a machine that would suit your purpose very well. It weighs 6.5 kg and is a bit heavier than the usual portable, but it is good for heavy duty and at the same time conveniently portable when carried in its case.
We have one of these machines in stock and we shall be pleased to arrange for you to try it.
Although costs have been rising since March, we have not yet raised our pries, but may have to do so when present stocks run out. We therefore advise you to place your order with us at once.
英语写作指导13
环境保护
大气污染：关键词：sulfur dioxide(二氧化硫，一氧化碳)
Although substantial progress had been made, sulfur dioxide and monoxide levels were up 25 percent nationally and particulates were increased by more than 14 percent. What is more, pollution levels in a dozen cities were higher than those of 1970. Of 20,000 major stationary sources of air pollution, about 5,000 failed to meet the schedules, and well over half the steel plants and nonferrous smelters in the United States continued to be in violation of federal regulations.
英语写作指导14
（一） 书信（Letter）
(No.9 the Seventh Street
Washington D.C. USA)
June 26th, 20xx
Dear Cathy,
I like your program very much. It has a lot of interesting stories, attractive games and popular English songs. From your program we can learn many new words and expressions. We can improve our listening and speaking in English .We can also
know more about the culture of other countries in the world. In a word, we learn a lot from your program.
I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t follow you easily sometimes because you speak little bit fast. It’s also a pity that we can only watch your program twice a week.
Thank you for giving us a lot of fun! I wish your program a bright future !
Yours
WangPing
(二)电子邮件（e-mail）
To: Kayla @hotmail.com
Cc: None
Subject: Re: Pen-pal wanted
Hello, Kayla,
I’m Mike. I am 15 years old. I’m glad to know that you would like to have a pen-pal. I also want to find a pen-pal from the Internet. When I’m free, I like to listen to the
music, go hiking and play basketball. I’m good at English and art .We can learn from each other and be good friends .I hope to hear from you often.
Best wishes.
Mike
(三)通知
Notice
Attention, please!
This is your monitor, Chen Tao. I have something to tell you. This Friday, April 21st, we shall go to Stone Field Country Park for this year’s spring trip. The
park is in the south of Guangzhou. It’s a very beautiful place. We can see many kinks of plants there. We can also have sports games for fun and BBQ meals in the park. But remember that fire can only be allowed in the barbecue places.
(四)日记
假设今天是20xx年3月12日，星期天，天晴。请根据下面通知内容，用英语写一篇80个词左右的日记。参考词汇：ride, arrive, dig a hole, put , carry water,
.
March 12,20xx, Sunday Fine
Today is fine. All our teachers and we students went to plant trees. At 8 in the morning we met outside the school gate. Then we rode our bikes to West Hill. About half past eight, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, some of us dug holes, some put the young trees in the holes, and others carried water and watered the trees. We all worked hard. About 11:30, we left there. Though we were very tired, we felt very happy.
(五)贺卡
（六）电话留言
From: __________ To: __________
Date: ___________ Time: ___________
Message: _________________________________
_______( 记录人)
（七）寻物启事
Lost
I lost/left a key with a brown toy monkey on the playground on June
26th.Will the finder who found it, please come to Class 1,Grade 3 of No.1 Middle School or call 13988776655.
Thank you!
Gao Feng
（八）失物招领(Found)
请根据以下内容写一则英文失物招领：假设你是市中学生运动会的`一名志愿者，为运动会服务。6月8日上午你在体育馆（gymnasium）捡到一只手表和一套运动服，请失主打电话与你联系。联系电话：22843215
Found
A watch and a suit of sports clothes were found in the gymnasium on the morning of June 8th.Will the owners ring me up? My telephone number is 22843215.
（九）请假条
假设你是王刚，请你给外籍教师Mr Brown 写张请假条。注意请假条格式。内容：明天你要到泉州参加运动会，不能跟同学们一起去植树，请假一天。
Dear Mr Brown,
Tomorrow I will go to Quanzhou to take part in a sports meeting, so I can’t plant trees with my classmates. I will have to ask a day off.
Thank you.
WangGang
（十） 主题发言 （或演讲）
Proud of school
My school is very big with several tall buildings. There are 20xx students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere
We have lots of fun at school. After class we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis .Sometimes we have class meetings. They are very interesting.
I love my school because it’s like a big family. The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.
I want to be an inventor. I would like to try out many ideas and make many
machines to change the world. If I want to be an inventor, I should have much knowledge. So now, I must study hard, and do many things all by myself.
(十一)海报
七月四日晚上7：30，九年级一班的同学将在他们的教室里举行毕业晚上。任务一：请你帮他们设计一张英文海报（Poster）。
A Party
Time:7:30 p.m
Date: July 4 th
Place: Class 1,Grade 9
任务二：假如你是九年级一班的同学，你能为晚会做些什么呢？（至少两条）
(十二) 便条
Note
Dear Meimei,
I came to your house to return your books. But your were out. I have had to leave the books with Lily. Thank you for lending them to me.
By the way, we are going to hold an English party on Saturday evening. Please call me if time doesn’t suit.
Wei Fang
英语写作指导15
Unit 1 How can we become good learners？
本单元话题为“学会学习”，与之相关的话题作文主要为谈论英语学习方法，这是各地中考英语真题中最常考的话题作文之一。写作时可根据具体要求或提示，对相关的学习方法提出建议。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）What about listening to…？
（2）Try to guess …by…
（3）The more…，the more…
（4）…is the secret to language learning。
（5）I think…should…
（6）It’s a good idea to…
【典型例题】
为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，某初中英语学习报正在举办以“how to be a good learner”为题的征文比赛，请踊跃投稿。
【优秀范文】
How to be a good learner
To be a good learner，we should have good habits and ways of learning。
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class。 After class，we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time。 It’s good to study in groups and help each other。 We should do more reading in our free time。 If we have any problems，we’d better ask others for help。 As a student，working hard is important，but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy。
I think all above is helpful to us to be a good learner。
Unit2 I think that mooncakes are delicious！
本单元是围绕节日这一话题展开的，是大家较为熟悉的内容，要想写好这个话题的文章，首先要注意其体裁，通常是电子邮件式的说明文，介绍一两个中国的传统节日，内容涉及节日名称、时间、含义及主要活动，还应谈到你喜欢该节日及理由。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）I love…because…
（2）I think they are…to…
（3）You’ll have good luck in the New Year。
（4）Chinese people have been celebrating…for centuries。
【典型例题】
假如你是李磊，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封80词左右的电子邮件。介绍一两个中国的传统节日、如春节、中秋节等。
【优秀范文】
Dear Tom
I am very glad to tell you something about spring festival。
It’s a traditional festival in china。 It comes in winter。
It’s time to get new。 We usually clean and decorate our houses carefully before it comes。 I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes。 We put on Chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows。
It’s time to say goodbye to the last year，and say hello to the New Year。 Everyone goes home to get together with their families，no matter how far it is。 They must have dinner together on that day。 They must visit their relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them。 When the kids greet their grandparents，they can get money。
Unit3 Could you please tell me
where the restaurants are？
本单元介绍如何指路，也是写作要涉及的话题。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）Let me tall you how to get there。
（2）You can walk along......
（3）Turn left/right to......
（4）Go straight along......
【典型例题】
你有两张红旗剧院的戏剧票，想要邀请Rob和你一起去看。请你给他写封信，邀请他并告诉他具体该怎么到达红旗剧院。
【优秀作文】
Dear Rob，Are you free next Sunday？There will be a concert in Hongqi Theater。 I have two tickets and I hope you can go with me。 Now let me tall you how to get there。
First，you can walk along Zhaowuda Road after you leave your home。 Then turn left onto Third Street。 Go straight along Third Street。 When you get to Walking Street，turn right。 Then go along the street until you see Hongqi Theater on your right。
I will meet you at the gate of Hongqi Theater。
Yours，Liu Ming
Unit4 I used to be afraid of the dark。
本单元话题为“我们怎样变化的”，主要围绕人或事物从过去到现在所发生的变化展开描述。写作时首先要理清写作的逻辑顺序，注意过去与现在的对比。在句式的使用上，既可用used to do/be…，but now…，也可以直接用一般过去时描述过去的情况，用一般现在时描写现在的情况，各种句式交替使用，以免文章显得呆板。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）…used to do/be
（2）How/what about you？
（3）…has/have changed a lot in the last few years。
【典型例题】
请你以Changes in people’s life为题描述最近几年人们生活上的变化。词数80词左右。
提示：
1、人们的联系方式、娱乐方式的改变
2、人们的出行方式及居住环境的改变
【优秀范文】
Changes in people’s life
Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the last few years。
In the past people kept in touch with relatives or friends mainly by sending letters。 They would listen to the radio for news and other information。 Children used to go to school by bike。 Big families had to share small rooms。
Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the internet at home。 When they are free，they watch the news and other programs on TV。 Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars。 More and more people live in big and bright apartment with several rooms。
In a word，people live better than before。
Unit5 What are the shirts made of？
本单元涉及的.话题是“中国制造的东西”，话题作文通常会涉及民间艺术以及文化传承。这是一个适合记叙、说明两种体裁相结合的话题，同时也是学生喜欢写、有话写的题材。写好这类文章，最重要的是准确捕捉写作的“精髓”，有条理的把要描述的某一事物展现出来，此类话题的写作要立足事实、表达真情实感。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）China is famous for…
（2）It’s great that China is so good at…
（3）…wish that in the future…will…
（4）These usually try to show…
（5）They are seen as symbols of…
【典型例题】
假如你是韩梅，远在美国的笔友Linda给你写信了，信中，Linda向你了解中国有什么着名小吃。请根据表格提示给Linda回信。
民间小吃：糖葫芦（tanghulu）
原料：山楂（haw），有些地方的糖葫芦用草莓（strawberry）、葡萄（grape），甚至小苹果等制成
历史渊源据说：宋代（the song dynasty）一位皇帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫芦治好了病，因此流传下来象征幸福和团员
【优秀范文】
Dear Linda，You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country。 Well，in my country，one of the most famous snacks is tanghulu。
Each different part of China has different tanghulu。 It is usually made of haws，which are put together on a stick and covered with ice sugar。 But there are more materials for tanghulu today in some places，such as strawberries，grapes，and even little apples。
It is said that tanghulu ever saved the life of an emperor’s wife in the Song Dynasty。 It was so delicious and healthy that many Chinese people like eating it。 It is now seen as the bright symbols of happiness and reunion。
Are you looking forward to eating it？Come to my country，and I’ll treat you to tanghulu。
Unit6 When was it invented？
本单元的话题是“发明”，涉及科普知识与技术等内容，是学生最感兴趣的话题之一。写作体裁多为说明文，写好这类文章一定要抓住事物的特征、功能和用途。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）When was …invented？
（2）It was invented…
（3）They are used for…
【典型例题】
计算机在我们的生活、工作中的作用越来越大，你知道计算机的起源与发展吗？请结合计算机的发明时间（1946年）、外形、用途等方面，谈一下它的发展变化，并说明你对未来计算机的畅想。
【优秀范文】
Computer
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life。 Do you know when the computer was invented？
The computer was invented in 1946。 At that time，it was huge。 With the development of science and technology，the computer has grown smaller。 Now there are many kinds of computers，such as personal computers and laptops。 The computer is a very useful tool in our life。 For example，it can send some messages to foreign friends by email。 What’s more，it can share information with others through the World Wide Web。 We can also listen to music or play the game on computers。 It makes us relax。
It’s hard to imagine what our life would be like without computers。 I think computers will be more convenient and they are going to change our life completely in the near future。
Unit7 Teenagers should be allowed
to choose their own clothes。
本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家里的规章制度进行了论述。写作中常涉及这一话题。写作时可以发表自己的观点，在表达观点时，要有理有据，观点不能偏激。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）I think teenagers should be allowed to …
（2）I agree that…
（3）I don’t agree with…
【典型例题】
国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多的规章制度规范同学们的行为。请你写一篇短文，向大家介绍一两条校规或校纪，并谈一下自己的看法。
【优秀范文】
There are many rules in our school。
At our school we have to wear uniforms every day。 The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly。 I think young people should look smart，so I’d like to wear my own clothes。 If we have to wear uniforms，we should be allowed to design our own uniforms。 That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy。
Although we have different views on the rules，I think everyone should obey the school rules。
Unit8、 It must belong to Caral。
本单元话题为“神秘事物”，围绕这一话题对我们生活中出现的不确定的事情进行推理判断。要求我们恰当使用情态动词客观的对提供的材料进行分析，以推测某件物品可能是某人的或某人正在做什么。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）sth.must /can’t/might/could be......
（2）sb. must/can’t/might/could be doing…
【典型例题】
你在上学的路上捡到了一件T—shirt，它是你校某位同学的。请根据以下提示做出一个合理的推断，并把推断的经过和结果写出来。可适当发挥，词数80词左右。
提示：
1、 Mary和Sally的T恤衫都丢了
2、T恤衫上有长头发
3、T恤衫口袋里有一张信用卡和一张刘德华的照片
【优秀范文】
Oh，look！There is a T—shirt here。 It’s a school T—shirt。 The owner must be a student。
Mary and sally lost their T—shirt。 Could it be Mary’s or Sally’s？There is long hair on the T—shirt。 But both of them have long hair。 There is a photo of Liu Dehua in the pocket。 Sally likes Liu Dehua very much，but Mary’s favorite star is Sun Yanzi。 So，it belongs to sally。 There is credit card too。 Then，it must be sally’s school T—shirt because she is the only person who has a credit card in our school。
Unit9、 I like music that I can dance to。
【典型例题】
假如你叫李明，是一名中学生，经常收听由美国主持人Philip主持的音乐节目，请根据内容要点提示，用英语给主持人写一封信。
要点：
1、你很喜欢这个节目，特别是节目播放的歌词很优美，是很棒的英语歌曲。
2、在你学习感到疲劳时，会打开收音机听这个节目。
3、从节目中你学到了很多单词。
4、告诉他你最喜欢的是什么类型的音乐，请他帮助你介绍一些相关的歌手和CD。
【优秀范文】
Dear Philip，My name is Li Ming。 I am a middle school student。 I often Listen to your program at night。 I like it very much，especilly the English songs。
I like the English songs that have great lyrics。 Every night，I will turn on the radio and listen to your program when I feel tired。 It helps me relax myself。 By the way，I have learnt many English words from these songs。
At last，I like singers who can sing clearly and write their own songs。 Can you introduce me some singers and their CDs？You can send me e—mail at Liming@yahoo.com。
I am looking forward to hearing you。 Thank you very much！
Yours
Li Ming
Unit10。 You are supposed to shake hands。
本单元以“风俗习惯”为话题，围绕这一话题主要学习各国的不同礼仪，如见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪等，谈论在不同的场合应该做什么，了解不同国家的习俗。最能体现本单元话题以及语言运用能力的作文为介绍不同国家风俗习惯的短文、书信或邮件等。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
（1）You are supposed/expected to…
（2）You should…
（3）You are not supposed to…
【典型例题】
假如你是苏敏，你的美国笔友Tina发来电子邮件，说她下周要来中国，但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少，于是向你寻求帮助，请你给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况。
提示：
1、风俗习惯的不同：中国人第一次见面时握手；
2、见面时谈论的内容；
3、餐桌礼仪的不同：我们用筷子就餐；就餐时不能用筷子指着别人；就餐时不可以多说话等。
【优秀范文】
Dear Tina，I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to china next week。 I hope to see you soon。
As we all know，different countries have different customs。 So the manners in China are very different from those in your country。 Let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country。
First，we Chinese are supposed to shake hands when we meet for the first time。 Then we greet each other。 After that，you can talk about something relaxing。 But you are not supposed to talk about someone’s salary，age and so on。 Second，we use chopsticks to have meals while you use your forks at table。 Also，it’s bad manners to talk too much when you’re having meals。
I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in our country。
Unit11、Sad movies make me cry。
本单元主要谈论某件事情对我们的影响以及我们的感受，这是一个记叙和议论相结合的话题。写这类话题的文章，观点要明确，并给出具体事例，最后适当加以评论。
【典型例题】
每个人都有幸运和不幸的时候，在你的记忆中，你所经历的最糟糕的一天是什么样的？写出你的经历过程和感受。要求语句通顺，语法正确，不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【优秀范文】
I still remember the bad day I have experienced clearly。
It was a Friday。 I woke up late because my clock didn"t go off。 I felt very nervous。 I might be late for school。 When I got to school，the teacher was having a class。 I felt afraid。 As a result，the teacher punished me。 I was very sad。 By the time we had English class，I found I had left my English book at home。 So I had to borrow one。
After lunch，I fought with my classmate because of some small things。The teacher kicked me off the classroom and sent me home。 I knew I let my parents down。 I also felt I wasn"t a good child。 I didn"t feel like eating dinner and went to bed。
That night I thought about these things carefully and decided to make a change。 I believed I could be a good boy soon。
Unit12。、Life is full of the unexpected。
【典型例题】
假如你是Tom，请记述你昨天不同寻常的一天：
1、闹钟没响，所以起床晚了；
2、想洗澡时，爸爸已经在洗澡了；
3、没吃早餐去赶公交，可到达公交站时车已经走了，只好跑到学校去；4。到达学校时，老师已经开始上课，对你的迟到感到很生气；5。交作业时发现作业放在家里了；6。历史课上受到老师的表扬，因为在家做了大量的准备工作。
【优秀范文】
Yesterday was a really bad day for me。
To start with，my alarm clock didn’t go off so that I got up late。 By the time I got up，my father had already gotten into the shower。 Then I rushed to the bus stop without breakfast。 By the time I got there，the bus had already left and I had to rushed to school。 When I got to school，my teacher had already started teaching and he was really angry with me。 Then it was time to hand in homework，but I had left it at home。 I was really embarrassed at that time。
One good thing was that my history teacher said something good to me because I had done a lot to prepare for this class。 It was the only good thing for me yesterday。
Unit13、 We"re trying to save the earth！
【典型例题】
假如你所在的城市正在创建“国家级卫生城市”，作为该城市的一员，你会有许多感触和想法。请以“How to set up a national healthy city？”为题，根据所给提示写一篇80—100个单词的英语短文。
【优秀范文】
How to set up a national healthy city？
Our city is trying to set up a national healthy city。 As a member of the city，I think we should obey the rules。
We can’t throw rubbish here and there。 We can’t talk loudly in public，such as in the library or in the museum。 We can’t spit and smoke in public as well。 When we are on the bus，we should give our seats to the old and children，as well as some women with babies in their arms。
During our daily lives，we should be polite to others。 And we should obey the traffic rules。 Remember to stop when the traffic light is red。 We must go across the road when the traffic light is green。 Finally，we should also turn off the lights before we leave the room。
I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful as long as we all try our best to do something for it！
Unit14、 I remember meeting all of you in Grade7。
【典型例题】
初中三年即将结束，请写一篇英语短文介绍你难忘的一个人或一件事。
【优秀范文】
A person I will never forget
The person I will never forget is my English teacher。
He is a tall man with glasses。 He likes sports and often plays football with us in his free time。 He is very humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting。 He is kind but strict with us。 He never allows us to make careless mistakes when we have an exam and always encourage us to study hard and be good at English。 He often tells us it is useless to memorize news words without understanding。
My English has greatly improved with his help。
英语写作指导
